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[[Animation] THE ULTIMATE SMASH]

Even though everything that you draw is really inconsistent it's not bad. It actually might be your own style (or at least some of it will stay when you polish your skills)
Second half obviously better than the first since in the first character doesn't do much... actually I'm not sure what is he doing.
Good synchronisation of music and action- shows that you don't need to be amazing at drawing to be able to create something interesting in terms of animation.

There is a potential. Some may wonder what will you be able to make in the future if you keep doing animations.

Keep up the good work.

SuperTailsKen responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

[WHERE WAS BATMAN DURING SUICIDE SQUAD]

Barely more than 50% of the thing is an "animation" in which last like 10 seconds is still frame image...
Also... I get that the main site where you wanted to upload it was youtube but really... spend some time to make it not so obvious...

thesweepstudios responds:

mwah

[CHiNA MAN]

I would recommend that you make sure to stick to one size of the drawing because right now borders of it jump all over the place which distracts us from actual frames.

Also consistency. Guy appears to be taller when you look at him from behind, hat grows bigger even the background changes a bit.

If your goal is to make animations later on you should learn consistency and to make the movement smoother. Unless you're going to go for a disturbing vibe- everyone have difference preferences.

Anyway. Good luck.

kidpirateanimation responds:

thanks for the feedback i'll take it into consideration ;)

[FIRST EVAH ANIMATION!]

Hmm... so all of these sprites aren't made by you, you just use them to make this animation? (I just want to establish if I should look at the sprites itself too)

I know most of it was on purpose but you could move your camera further away from the character... it's too close and if camera follows the character who moves quite fast it might be harder to appreciate the animation because it feels like your eyes have to even grasp where the character is on the screen.

Good luck with your animations.

DannyStyle responds:

It's actually REALLY weird... you know the "character customization" thing in certain video games? that's pretty much what it is. So each pixel wasn't individually crafted BUT each part (hair, face, eyes, mouth, ect) was custom made by me, and the creation engine works so that you don't have to give credit to the program.

Short answer being, no, I am afraid not. No ands-buts-or execptions. It was made off the character creation engine "BannedStory"

AND THANK YA SO MUCH FOR ASKING!!! ;)
i'll try to answer all questions in the future

[Minewars]

I'm going to be rude now... Such wasted potential...
Animation is great, you have a story.... but no audio?... It really makes your creation worse cause it's not really enjoyable to watch a silent video.
Sound effects + voice actors and probably music would be ideal... but at least sound effects... anything.

Dialogue skips to fast...
I understand why did you choose to use different colors in it but most of them are hard to read.

This could be reeeally good. As I've said I like the animation and even the story I think... but lack of audio is still a turn off.

ULTA-BEAST responds:

The only lack of audio is the voice actors.

[The Chocolate - 3D Animation]

It's not bad I guess... but why the hashtags?...

Seb8tian responds:

I use hashtags on twitter to refer random ideas :P

[There's A Dinosaur Stuck In My Tooth !]

Yeah, it's not really an animation... yet. The artstyle seems alright so it would be nice to see more of you as you're going to get better and better at it on your journey with animation.

goretoons responds:

Thank you so much for you commentary ! It means a lot and I will do my best to animate more. If you want to see more of me, I'll be here -- https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC8bbQQOkDDru3SIy0RJ8Mfw

if you're not able to just click the link, copy and paste it into your search bar.

[Ghost is in da haus]

I'm confused... Why is she expecting that there's a ghost? Is it because something answered her? If so... why the zoom in on the "I'll come later" text from mom?

Vakingo responds:

Because Mom comes home at the beginning of the video and says " I'm home , Sussy ". But mom isnt in home, and she type her that will come back too late, so that voice wasnt her mother... xD

[Simgirls Rosebery Teaser II]

This made me feel uncomfortable... maybe because the song is so unfitting to what's going on... Spend a bit more time to find the one that fits next time.

sim-man responds:

I did change the music at the end. Well but one and a half star does not make sense to me.