I feel like you could make really nice, fast paced animations in the future if you stick to it. The tempo of your animations and expressions is quite nice. For now improving the art style would benefit you the most. Keep up the good work
I feel like you could make really nice, fast paced animations in the future if you stick to it. The tempo of your animations and expressions is quite nice. For now improving the art style would benefit you the most. Keep up the good work
The audio doesn't stop at the end of the animation so when the animation loops we get another layer of the audio and then another and so on.
yeah ive noticed that but i dont know how to fix it
I have no idea why, but somehow I keep finding this animation again and it makes me smile.
Awesome, Dude. =)
Too bad you gave up on it. The beginning was pretty sweet
The story is fine I guess. I am actually kinda curious what you can make next.
I don't think there was a need for subtitles. The mayo on the escalator makes you question the situation on it's own. It makes you wonder why is it here.
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Quite pleasant animation. Good job.
For next time you could work on your proportions a bit. They go all over the place.
The plot is absolute nonsense. She wasn't chained or anything which made the bracelets just unwanted piece of jewelry.
Most expressions feel too exaggerated or weird.
Some guy showed up and throws you a key to finaly "let you free from your imprisonment". Is the expression used appropriate in any way?
Why can't you touch the sword? Because it may be some kind of a trap? Well, the outcome didn't change anyway.
The difference between the background and the things that are about to be animated in the first scene is unreal. I know some things are animated like that, but it was too much... Especially because the thing shouldn't be so bright in the dark place. While writing this part I realised that it might be because the scene with the ring is the only one without any shadows for some reason.
This time the bad stick out more for me, but good luck with the next one.
Stop beating... the dead horse. I guess it's not my humor, bur repeating the same dick joke over and over for a minute with kinda childish punchline doesn't seem fun nor interesting to me.
The art style is alright.
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