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[Snake.is]

How is this any different than slither.io?

[Pixel Run]

Sound effects are too loud.

[Tanks Journey]

I find it odd that you've decided to put controls in the description but not all of them.

Left Mouse Button- Shot
Spacebar- Jump
(idk if there's more)

Why can I jump as a tank?... It's not a bug... and you can't finish even the first level without it...
Also... you didn't specify the objective.
Tanks and platformers don't go well together.

[nfoldn]

The character looks surprisingly good for such a game. It's actually a shame that you want to go full minimalistic with the game. This character could use some some backstory, some adventure with a goal. If you don't want to go full dialogue-based story you can try visual one... of course it's harder.

Also... what instructions did you left? I had no idea blue areas will kill me. You might have stripped too many words.

Music is a bit too loud. Also making us choose at the start if we want to play with SFX or not is kind of strange.

I think it's nice that you've included downloadable version in the description.

Keep up the good work.

anosci responds:

Indeed, the game was designed and nearly finished before I added any art or character details. Any story I added would have to be tacked on, and that's the worst kind of story imo.

The (lack of) cohesion towards a theme might be the weakest part of the game.

As for the blue areas you mentioned: To paraphrase another game, "murder is a form of communication." Lives are cheap and being killed is a very minimal setback in this game, which is why I felt I could strip away the dialog for the blue areas.

Anyway, thanks for the review!

[Tabby's Bacon Adventure]

Why does pressing button to turn left makes me go right and vice versa?
Also... it could use some sound effects.

[Paper OS!]

What's the point of this actually?

vladimirdabic responds:

To play and explore + when an update comes up it asks you to update ingame :D

[Pong]

I think that while during making this game you didn'y pay much attention to workspace area or something because now I can't even see the pong bars/play the game.

[dot O dot]

Pretty fine looking game. Concept is ok but is executed a bit poorly.

It wouldn't be bad to add some explaining to your moves but it takes just seconds to figure out so let's move on.

I don't like that some of the moves you don't use to progress but you have to waste them somewhere first...

[The Red Button 2016]

Not much of a game. I wonder if additional image showing when this button is actually pressed would make it a bit better.
Good luck learning new code.

[Makros Superpos]

Too random to be really enjoyable for me.