DreamND's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bonk The Mudkip!]

The audio doesn't stop at the end of the animation so when the animation loops we get another layer of the audio and then another and so on.

QuackifyYT responds:

yeah ive noticed that but i dont know how to fix it

[Sonic Scream]

I have no idea why, but somehow I keep finding this animation again and it makes me smile.

SuperStaticPro responds:

Awesome, Dude. =)

[Mayonnaise On An Escalator]

I don't think there was a need for subtitles. The mayo on the escalator makes you question the situation on it's own. It makes you wonder why is it here.

RayenIDK responds:

true

[The Lucky Goose]

In the first scene we can see neither the tree nor the family. Creating a surprising outocome is one thing, but in this case it depends on consistency of the surroundings and camera angles.
The way it was portrayed I don't even know for sure if this guy is a hunter or a hitman.
Did he miss? I don't know.
The guy says "Stupid little... something". Why though? Did he miss before to be annoyed or what?
I'd focus on consistency first.

saraphporter responds:

I guess you kinda have a point. It probably would have been funnier to show that the hunter actually meant to shoot the kid.

[Julie and the Julies]

I guess this is the alternate universe where Steven Universe is black and lives in a city

CrayCrayAnimations responds:

Close but not quite!

[i fucked up my diet (SWF)]

I would say this animation is kind of charming and nostalgic for me and well... it is. Too bad you've gotten lazy at the end.
I see it's your first animation there so I'm waiting for another one.
You can create something cool. Don't discourage yourself.

ChickenLeggy responds:

thank you! this was a little test video cause i was having an artblock

[Transmission From The Moon]

You wanted it to look old? Well... I think it mostly turned out to sound old-I remember such audio quality in some old flash parodies on youtube. If you've encountered such videos and you wanted to imitate them I can't really judge the artstyle or animation because it wasn't the point of them. They needed to have anything moving/changing positions once in a while to an audio clip.

Since I'm not sure I'm just going to say that you've chosen quite boring audio clip.

plasticapple responds:

Thank you for the response! I know it didn't come across the way I wanted it to, so it's great to hear your feedback on why. :)

[Ghostbusters the Musical]

I cant grasp like half of the lyrics... or more.
I don't know if this song was made for this animation or you just used it but they could sing clearer.

Sketchead responds:

It's a commission I made for lhugueny, so the animation was made for the song.

Lyrics are in the description if you can't make em out!

[Crossing]

Why did the boy cross the road?- I don't know and neither does he. I mean c'mon. He wanted to cross the road just so he can make an awkward 180 degree turn and then spend way too much time to run like 5 meters...
Overall it's not bad. Mood of this animation is nice too... but I guess it would be nice to have some logic behind it too.

newgamingspies responds:

:P Thanks! :D

[Tech-Savvy Tektiti]

Why is that most of the character's actions are silent? Example- Character drops a can on the ground- nothing.
Nonetheless, the animation is not bad.

PennilessRagamuffin responds:

This animation was created for the Newgrounds Sound Jam, in which animators were challenged to create an animated short using at least 20 of 30 provided sound effects. Additional sound effects were prohibited, making it a tricky prompt, for sure.
TL;DR I didn't want to be disqualified D: